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Title: Sherlock Holmes in New York

Rating: R for language, violence, allusions to sexuality, drug use

Pairing: Sherlock/ Irene Adler (past), Sherlock/ John bromance (or pre-slash, if you have your slash goggles on)

Warnings: Nothing extremely graphic, see rating.

Spoilers: All three episodes to be safe.

Wordcount: 24,400

Summary: When Sherlock tracks Moriarty to New York City, he's drawn in to helping an old friend. John isn't sure what to make of any of it.

Betas/ Britpickers: pantropia, herovillian, brewsternorth, marshmellowed


Author's Notes:  So this is the end.  There was just so much I couldn't fit in... I have copious notes.  And there really is a track listing for the mix tape, which I spent hours agonizing over.   The Sherlock/Irene epic teen angst prequel will most likely not see the light of day, but I've got loads of backstory.  If you've made it this far, thank you! 

 

Continued from pt 9


Epilogue


John checked himself out of the hospital against medical advice the next day. He still had a drainage tube near the hole in his back, but his condition was stable. He knew it could be potentially dangerous to move with the broken rib, but he'd seen the x-rays and was confident that the rib wouldn't shift and puncture his lung unless he took blunt force trauma to the area. He was perfectly capable of dealing with his own wounds. Irene and her son had stayed at the hospital the whole time, despite numerous protests. They'd all been questioned by the police repeatedly, until another FBI agent showed up and pulled rank, taking over jurisdiction of the case.


He'd found out from Sherlock that Moran had been found dead in a kennel behind the lodge along with six dogs. He'd been shot in the back of the head. Moriarty had escaped again. Irene's son had been kept locked in the nursery, but had only been bound and gagged for a few hours before they'd shown up. He'd been heavily sedated most of the time, so he hadn't known how long he'd been gone for. The boy was reluctant to talk about any of it. Irene had already made calls to secure him a therapist, and with luck, he wouldn't develop any lasting psychological scars.


John lay awkwardly, half curled on his side in the back seat of Irene's car. He was propped up with a folded blanket on Sherlock's lap in order to keep pressure off of the drainage tube. It would have been more humiliating if he wasn't half out of his head between the opiates and the pain they couldn't entirely block out. Sherlock had sat stiffly, unsure of where to put his arm. John had patted his knee and told him to relax. Sherlock had rested his hand gently on the curve of John's shoulder. Eventually, Sherlock's hand had drifted from John's shoulder to the back of his neck, where he toyed with the hair absently.


The ride back was quiet and uncomfortable. Irene and Nero bickered over what music to listen to, which eased the tension in the car a little. They settled on swing music, of all things. John drifted in and out of full consciousness until the car stopped outside Irene's house. Sherlock helped him up the stairs to Irene's guest room and helped him get settled. Before dropping off to sleep again, John gave Sherlock a list of supplies he'd need that they hadn't been able to obtain from the hospital.


Irene had insisted that they should stay with her until John could remove the drainage tube and would be able to fly. John had felt a little strange at first, especially in light of Sherlock's adamant protests that they would get another hotel room, but gave in eventually. He'd rather recover in a stranger's house than a hotel room.


John slept for the better part of three days, only getting up to use the bathroom and check his wounds. Irene helped him to change the dressings each time they needed it. Nero brought most of his meals, which were surprisingly good, if slightly unconventional. Irene confided that Nero had spent hours researching the dietary needs of someone recovering from John's various injuries. Sherlock had been conspicuously absent for the times John was conscious. Two new pairs of pyjamas and a pair of thick wool slipper socks that reminded him of his favourite jumper had shown up in his room at some point.


On the fourth day, Nero came in the room bearing Irene's laptop and a stack of DVDs. “Mom said you should watch these, even if you're not bored, because they're a vital part of of the history of American cinematography. Except for Heavenly Creatures, which is technically Kiwi, but doesn't count because Hollywood owns Peter Jackson now.” He spoke as though he were reciting a memorized speech, then broke into a small smile. He set everything on the bed, and then stood there for a minute looking uncomfortable. “I um, wanted to say thanks. For everything. You saved me and my Mom's lives. So thanks.”


John smiled, accepting his words as graciously as his modesty allowed. “You're welcome. I'm just sorry you had to go through all that.”


Nero shrugged. “I really don't remember a lot. It could have been worse.” Then he looked up with a wicked smirk that was the spitting image of Sherlock. “Chicks dig emotional trauma.”


John huffed a laugh. Nero left the room and John looked through the DVDs. He avoided the action films and picked High Fidelity instead. He must have fallen asleep, because the next thing he knew, the laptop was being gently slid out from under his hand. He looked up in time to see the startled look on Sherlock's face. John yawned and shuffled himself up the pillows a little. “Did you find the letterpress yet?”


“As I suspected, it was in the basement of the adjoining building, accessible by a false wall in the basement of Stark's shop. Stark owns both buildings and rented the top space to Hatherly Engineering Associates as a cover.”


“Any word on Moriarty?” John already knew the answer, but needed to confirm it.


“None.”


John made a non-committal noise and yawned again, wincing at the pull of his broken rib.


Sherlock grimaced, but whether in sympathy or his own discomfort at his role in John's situation was unclear. “Do you um, need anything?” Sherlock asked.


“Some company wouldn't bother me.” John shifted backward to make room for Sherlock to sit. “Irene sent Nero up earlier with a collection of films selected to educate me in the finer aspects of American cinema.”


Sherlock moved the pile of DVDs and lowered himself onto the bed tentatively. He flipped through the titles and loaded one into the tray. He settled himself back against the headboard, stretching his legs out on the bed and resting the laptop just above his hips. John had already seen Fight Club, and he wondered how long it would take Sherlock to figure out who Tyler Durden was.


On the sixth day of his convalescence, John judged that the drainage tube could come out. It was a relatively simple procedure and he talked Irene through it. She did a respectable job, and for the first time in a week, John could lay flat on his back. He couldn't do it for very long because of the exit wound, but he was glad for the extra range of movement.


He still spent a good portion of his time sleeping. Irene refreshed his pile of DVDs daily, and offered to go to the library to get him any books he might like to read. He declined, but she brought in some of her books. John found he liked On The Road, and thought of Sherlock when he read the paragraph beginning, “The only ones for me are the mad ones.”


Sherlock still wasn't around much, not that John expected a bedside vigil or anything. John refrained from asking him what he's been up to on the rare occasions Sherlock did enter the room.


On the seventh day, he got a parcel from Mrs. Hudson that contained a packet of hobnobs and a box of Twinings English Breakfast. There was a floral note card wishing him a speedy recovery. Sherlock must have contacted her at some point. On the ninth day, he got a care package of sweets and chocolates and crisps, along with a card signed by everyone on Lestrade's team. There was a tiny pocket field guide to the birds of Great Britain with a yellow sticky note on the cover. Try birdwatching. -Sally. John snickered.


After two weeks, John judged himself able to withstand the rigours of travel, even if it would still be excruciatingly painful to sit upright in an airline seat for six hours. Sherlock booked the tickets for the next day. Irene insisted on driving them to the airport. She hugged both of them, and Nero shook John's hand. He didn't touch Sherlock, but they had some kind of Holmes telepathic exchange, at the end of which, Sherlock gave a curt nod and Nero a half-smile. When they got to the gate, John found out their tickets had been upgraded to First free of charge. Sherlock muttered something about Mycroft, but it lacked the usual venom.


Upon exiting the plane, John received a text that a car was waiting for them. Too utterly exhausted to deal with a cab, he informed Sherlock that they'd take the ride offered to them. He was (pleasantly) surprised that Mycroft wasn't inside the car. Mrs. Hudson greeted them at the front door, giving hugs all around and scurrying off to make tea. Sherlock guided John to the sofa and immediately launched into a tantrum because while they'd been away someone had been in to tidy the flat. He stalked over to his skull and picked it up, complaining that it now smelled like Mr. Sheen and that it would take weeks for the shine to dull. John breathed in the familiar (and now cleaner) scent of 221B and felt happy to be home.


 

 

Date: 2010-11-26 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herovillain.livejournal.com
Oh, oh! Hi! Nice to see this live and on the air. :D Just as I mentioned before, it is beautifully done and the story is just as gripping on a second read as it was on the first read. :D Also, still expecting that prequel. Or even the sequel. :)

Love,
Herovillain :)

Date: 2010-11-26 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! I took my sweet-ass time on it, didn't I?

And as soon as the prequel is in any kind of shape to be seen by another human, you'll be the first to know :D

Thanks again for your awesome beta skills! :D

Date: 2010-11-26 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pantropia.livejournal.com
Glad to see you've posted it. I'll give it another read through when I've had some sleep.

Date: 2010-11-26 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Oh, you are the best. Seriously. I could write essays extolling the virtue of a diligent beta. But I won't, because then I would need someone to beta that, and the universe would implode.

Thank you again and again :D

Date: 2010-11-26 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pantropia.livejournal.com
:D It's easy to beta something that you've enjoyed reading.

Date: 2010-11-26 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samati.livejournal.com
This was wonderful.

Date: 2010-11-26 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! I've been neurotic over it for weeks, so it's very rewarding to hear the word wonderful.

Date: 2010-11-26 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmessann.livejournal.com
Enjoyable start to finish. And...yeah, if there's any chance of a sequel or prequel, sign me up. I'd love to see Sherlock and Nero interact a bit more.

Date: 2010-11-27 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm getting all pepped up since so many people (more than two = many, I have a primitive concept of numbers) want more of this. I foresee many late nights drinking gallons of tea and chainsmoking in my future.
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Date: 2010-11-27 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2010-11-27 12:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shezan.livejournal.com
This was utterly believable and lovely. I'll take a prequel, sequel, whichever you feel like writing, Sherlock & Irene as Sid and Nancy, or some more Sherlock with Nero. BRAVA!!!

Date: 2010-11-27 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm already working on both (prequel is 1/2 done and already 27k words, sequel is only 13k so far). I stalled out for a while, but I'm getting excited about writing again.

Date: 2010-11-27 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mein-profil.livejournal.com
Oh, this is perfect, I love it! To think that I nearly didn't read it because of the high word count and the Sherlock/OFC pairing! But it's brilliant, I can imagine Sherlock with this Irene perfectly.
Sequel, please?

Date: 2010-11-27 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! I waffled about the OFC thing. Irene isn't series canon yet. Book and movie, yes, BBC Sherlock, no. So she's other/ original, even if the comm has a tag for her (incidentally, she's the only character not mentioned or seen on screen in the series that had a character tag in the comm). I'm so glad you did read it. Thank you!

Date: 2010-11-27 02:31 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] errantcomment
Really well written and paced.
Very well done, I really enjoyed reading this.
Very nice take on Irene Adler too, so that's pretty awesome.
Thanks.

Date: 2010-11-27 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Oh wow, thank YOU. I feel really validated now, because you comment on all the kinkmeme fics I like but don't comment on because I'm a dirty lurker. :D (small grin is inadequate, imagine it larger and sparkly)

Date: 2010-11-27 03:42 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] errantcomment
Oh wow, I've been noticed.
^^;;

Date: 2010-11-27 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
I'm a creeper of the lowest order. I read the other comments, then I'm like, oh, someone already told them how awesome they are, so, y'know, they must know already and what I say will be redundant...

Date: 2010-11-27 04:05 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] errantcomment
True. I get like that if there are more than say thirty comments.
Cause you know, if authors start getting self esteem they'll start thinking they're people.
And that would be dreadful.

Date: 2010-11-27 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Riots would ensue. It would be anarchy.

Date: 2010-11-27 05:35 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] errantcomment
But it would be amazingly imaginative anarchy.
I have this image of a group of authors rioting down the street with their betas chasing after them yelling advice.

Date: 2010-11-29 06:16 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-11-29 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
HA! I missed this comment before. LOL seconded.

Date: 2010-11-27 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willow-41z.livejournal.com
I like the end of this-- I would like to know what Sherlock was up to in all that time; I imagine that the interactions with Nero and with Irene were delightful and also very awkward. I presume by the ending that Nero finds out who Sherlock is? I like their farewell!

Date: 2010-11-27 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! I have some written so far for those two missing weeks, but the whole storyline needs a lot of work. Much more research is needed. Nero is tough. I'm not schooled in the Nero Wolfe canon, and trying to blend a crotchety reclusive middle-aged guy with a contemporary (albeit weird) American teenager is doing mean things to my brain.

Date: 2010-11-27 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willow-41z.livejournal.com
I'm not familiar with the Nero Wolfe canon either, so I initially missed a few details you had planted-- the names of his friends, the setting of New York City, and his love of cooking!

Although BBC!Sherlock is not in love with routine-- that's not his particular quirk-- I can see him having a child who is. It just makes sense, somehow.

Date: 2010-11-27 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
I spent way too much time on Wikipedia for this whole fic. Like the nightclub- Love is actually a club in Greenwich Village. It seemed kind of lame and clunky in the fic, but it's real! I squeed my pants when I found a club that fit.

I see the Asperger's angle in Sherlock. And I see it in Nero Wolfe. Then again, I see it in a lot of people and I think it's more common than the estimates (.6%) people go by, especially among highly intelligent and creative people. I had a boyfriend who was very high functioning (wasn't diagnosed until he was 30, everyone always wrote him off as eccentric) and read a lot about the autism spectrum. The neurology might be genetic (still a point of contention, but generally accepted as a higher incidence in family members thing), but presents differently even among family members.

I'll get off my soapbox and crawl back in my hole now.

Date: 2010-11-27 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solara-karrde.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this very much! Any thought of a sequel? *begs*

Date: 2010-11-27 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you :D As for a sequel, I've been working on one, but dropped it in favor of another story, but I'm getting back into it now. No promises or anything, but it could happen.

Date: 2010-11-28 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com
What a lovely story! It's like an emo version of Roger Moore's "SH in NY". No, seriously, loved the action and the glimpse into Sherlock's wild past. John was lovely. Thanks for posting!

Date: 2010-11-28 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
It's based very loosely on the Wikipedia summary of the movie. I haven't seen the movie, and haven't been able to track down a bootleg copy (I'm not going to shell out for the DVD, and I dislike iTunes). Thank you for reading!

Date: 2010-11-29 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com
It's not a great movie; very entertaining in its way, but certainly not worth shelling out bucks for. Catch it if it airs sometime. The best thing in it is Irene Adler's voice-- very low, so you picture her as a contralto. The Moriarty was far too cartoony, but I suppose you can argue that ACD made him that way. :)

Date: 2010-11-29 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Yeah, when I saw it was James Bond vs. Gomez Addams I was kind of like... hmmm... but it was the 70's so, really... You can't beat Robert Stephens' Holmes for camp, though. He wore more eyeshadow in The Private Life of Sherlock Holmes than Tim Curry in Rocky Horror. I just looked up the chick who played Irene. She was in Orca, which scared the bejesus out of me when I was a kid, so now I have to rewatch it. Funny too that Christopher Lee played both Holmes brothers in movies. I need to stop looking at IMDB now.

Date: 2010-11-30 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariole.livejournal.com
Whee! We just ordered The Private Life of Sherlock Holmes on Netflix. I am impatient to see it. :D

> Funny too that Christopher Lee played both Holmes brothers in movies

It is totally funny. I suppose if you've been around as long as Lee, you've had the opportunity to play everything. All the more to watch. Cheers!

Date: 2010-11-29 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bugeyedmonster.livejournal.com
Loved this. I would love to see more of Nero interacting with Sherlock. (And John. I think John and Nero might get along better than Sherlock and Nero.)

Loved Donovan's note to John. lol! Sorry, Sally, but I think birdwatching probably doesn't have the adrenaline rush that 'Sherlock watching' does and that's what appeals to BAMF!John, I think. (Man should have become a test pilot.)

Date: 2010-11-29 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

John gets along better with everyone than Sherlock. Nero and Sherlock are two of a kind (seriously, Nero Wolfe is a total rip-off of Sherlock Holmes, it's like watching the Bollywood Star Wars). That never ends well.

Date: 2010-11-29 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bugeyedmonster.livejournal.com
it's like watching the Bollywood Star Wars

There's a Bollywood version of Star Wars? Does the Indian version of the Darth Vader character get a song-n-dance number? I would so watch it just for that.

Date: 2010-11-29 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
I don't think it actually exists, but there have been YouTube parodies. And I'm pretty sure there's a movie out there that borrows heavily on the plot. If it really does exist, I would give my firstborn to see it.

Date: 2010-11-30 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] newmixgirl.livejournal.com
I loved this, very well written and paced. Are there any chance for a sequel? I'd love to see more Sherlock and Nero interaction :)

Date: 2010-11-30 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you :D Nero is turning out to be difficult to write. It's been way too many years since I was a teenager.

Date: 2010-11-30 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ana-rpm.livejournal.com
This is great! Wonderful plot and in character. Any chance of a sequel? I'd love to see Sherlock actually deal with the fact he's got a kid. Please? ;)

Date: 2010-11-30 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you!:D I'm banging away at a sequel, but it's slow going.

Date: 2010-12-03 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] travels-in-time.livejournal.com
This was wonderful! There's so little case-fic for the BBC!verse (not that I am complaining about all the ship-fic, not at all) and this one not only had a real case with tons of detail, but a believable Irene and a complete backstory for her and Sherlock. Of COURSE Sherlock and Irene are Nero's parents. :D

I kind of wish we'd seen a bit more of the interactions between Sherlock and Nero, but given what we know of Sherlock and what Irene told us about Nero, I imagine there wasn't much besides the nodding and half-smiling, and I could see them both being perfectly content with that.

In all, A++++, would read again.

Date: 2010-12-03 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank You! ^_^

I'm so glad you liked the case-fic aspect. Google maps is awesome.

I'm working on the sequel, and doing dialogue between Nero & Sherlock is murder.

Thank you for the A++++. It's like an ebay rating! :D

Date: 2010-12-20 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carolyn-claire.livejournal.com
Very nice--there really aren't enough case stories in the fandom. I hope you'll write more! I enjoyed reading your Sherlock through your John's POV, too.

Date: 2010-12-21 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunken-standard.livejournal.com
Thank you! Writing dialogue for Sherlock is like dentistry on a tiger. Y'know, it's funny. I don't read much casefic, but I like writing it. Probably because I can fool myself into believing I'm clever when I'm doing it.

Date: 2011-03-07 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karadin.livejournal.com
That was a great fic, thanks very much!

Date: 2011-03-07 09:29 pm (UTC)

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